Artist's Entry:
Grenade Throwing
by robbo789789
Votes:18
Submitted 05/17/10
Description: this is my second GIF and it is quite good for me
constructive criticisms please
by robbo789789
Votes:18Submitted 05/17/10
Description: this is my second GIF and it is quite good for me
constructive criticisms please
Comments (from oldest to newest)
Posted: 05/17/10 10:30:41 AM
I'm not sure if it is your animation, but I'm getting leftover drawings
Also, pay attention to physics, projectiles curve, they don't fly straight, form a plateau then curve down. They form a perfect arch which your grenade does not.
Also, pay attention to physics, projectiles curve, they don't fly straight, form a plateau then curve down. They form a perfect arch which your grenade does not.
Posted: 05/17/10 03:52:08 PM
hmmmm let me get this straight,HOW COULD SOMETHING SO HORRIBLE GET A 2.5?!Do not vote yourself 5/5's.
now lets get this extremely long review started ok?
There where no physics whatsoever,to prove my point,a pineapple model fragmentation grenade weighs atleast two pounds,and you would not be able throw it very far.plus if you pull the key,and the spoon doesnt come off,what would break the chemical container(forgot the real name but oh well,I think its called a fuse)?
Now MAKE YOUR OWN PIVOT STICKS AND NOT USE STICK PACKS FROM DROIDZ!!!!Argggg.And dont use a circle for an explosion please ok?
now overall it was choppy,had no physics,horrible background,horrible grenade,and no preoper movements,plus its only seven seconds long.
now for the score;
(drum roll please)
ratatatatatatataatatatatarataratatatat
1/5!
now lets get this extremely long review started ok?
There where no physics whatsoever,to prove my point,a pineapple model fragmentation grenade weighs atleast two pounds,and you would not be able throw it very far.plus if you pull the key,and the spoon doesnt come off,what would break the chemical container(forgot the real name but oh well,I think its called a fuse)?
Now MAKE YOUR OWN PIVOT STICKS AND NOT USE STICK PACKS FROM DROIDZ!!!!Argggg.And dont use a circle for an explosion please ok?
now overall it was choppy,had no physics,horrible background,horrible grenade,and no preoper movements,plus its only seven seconds long.
now for the score;
(drum roll please)
ratatatatatatataatatatatarataratatatat
1/5!
Posted: 05/17/10 05:38:52 PM
wait a minute how does your other anim have 6300 views?!
Posted: 05/17/10 07:10:53 PM
dan first off: There is nothing wrong with Droidz, you try making a GOOD model of a gernade in pivot on your first try.
Second off: Not everythings about realism...look at every collab in exsistence and all the animations by the top 15 most viewed users, and tell me everything is realistic.
Third: This does suck though...whatever your doing it's leaving those lines, that happened to me on my first animation. I think it was because the screen was to big, yours is about the same size. Anyways, keep practicing and don't let faggots like dan get you down, he's really modest ever sense he got a second and third place weekly awards that he didn't deserve. He sucked so much when he started off, and he still sucks.
Second off: Not everythings about realism...look at every collab in exsistence and all the animations by the top 15 most viewed users, and tell me everything is realistic.
Third: This does suck though...whatever your doing it's leaving those lines, that happened to me on my first animation. I think it was because the screen was to big, yours is about the same size. Anyways, keep practicing and don't let faggots like dan get you down, he's really modest ever sense he got a second and third place weekly awards that he didn't deserve. He sucked so much when he started off, and he still sucks.
Posted: 05/17/10 07:29:40 PM
yet how do you explain the 6320 views on his first pivot.
Posted: 05/19/10 06:33:34 PM
Dan WTF is your problem - I dont 5/5 myself and furthermore why the hell shouldnt i use droidz when its an easier option - your just adding to an internet stereotype - so to quote and internet meme - YOU IS TROLLIN
Posted: 05/20/10 04:27:29 PM
YOU SEE?The reason im shouting is because im testing you!You can only be a pro once you've learned to ignore a haters comments because if you try to retaliate that gives them another opportunity to post a hate comment.This is a lesson i learned when i was a noob.kk?Im not trolling im testing you,remember that.
Posted: 05/24/10 10:36:37 PM
Dan is an idiot to put it simply. Furthermore, anything he says holds zero credit. Notice how he uses pass tense when referring to himself being a 'noob'? Unfortunately, he is, not was, a noob. He isn't testing you either. That is just another attempt to save his ass.
However, inferno does know more about pivot then I do so if you ever need questions answered, he is the go to guy (at least on this site)
However, inferno does know more about pivot then I do so if you ever need questions answered, he is the go to guy (at least on this site)
Posted: 05/25/10 05:24:11 PM
you shouldnt be talkin knowing the fact that you have the noob tag now.